KevinBurke wrote:Hi!
Great work here.
I'll add one thing to think about regarding plot...
There's a shorthand term for the changes the main character goes through, and it's called "story arc." The character---YOU---starts in one place, goes through the ordeal represented by the conflict of the play, and arrives at a different place from where he/she began.
Luke Skywalker: He begins as a farm boy longing for adventure. He then goes through a period of training, trial, and combat. He ends up a Jedi.
In a condensed version, look at what happens to every main character in any Twilight Zone episode.
In an extremely condensed version, look at the script for Penn & Teller's Flag Burning.
You can apply a story arc to one effect, a short show, or an extravaganza, and if you do, it will take your performance to an entirely new level.
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